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Love is a burning desire, That sets your heart on fire, Love is being with you, Someone saying I love you too, Love is your tender kiss, Something you don't want to miss, Love is you and me, And that is all I see. [link]
Hey Jear Bear:
When are ya gonna put more of your poetry up? I miss it a lot. I hope ya put more up, cuz your poetry is like a breath of fresh air when I read it.
C ya later
Hey,
It's the girl from the TalkCity Chat.
I finally discovered how to work this thing, lol.
"Love is like sand,
Loose in your palm;
If you hold it too tight,
It'll slip through your fingers and be gone."
I like the comparisons you made here. " Love" and "sand" are good nouns to use, and appropriate. Love being fragile, and sand being somewhat fragile and small. Plus "slip through your fingers", powerful statement, that continues with your comparison.
Since you don't have title yet, may I suggest something having to do with deserts/sand/time? Because your poem has a lot of those imageries and recurring themes.
Generally, I loved it. It's a fantastic poem, that captures the essence of love realistically, and in some fashion, a depressing and pessimistic view.
A Poem
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Love is a burning desire, That sets your heart on fire, Love is being with you, Someone saying I love you too, Love is your tender kiss, Something you don't want to miss, Love is you and me, And that is all I see. [link]
When are ya gonna put more of your poetry up? I miss it a lot. I hope ya put more up, cuz your poetry is like a breath of fresh air when I read it.
C ya later
Thanks for adding me to your friend list. See ya around
Later
DeJa
It's the girl from the TalkCity Chat.
I finally discovered how to work this thing, lol.
"Love is like sand,
Loose in your palm;
If you hold it too tight,
It'll slip through your fingers and be gone."
I like the comparisons you made here. " Love" and "sand" are good nouns to use, and appropriate. Love being fragile, and sand being somewhat fragile and small. Plus "slip through your fingers", powerful statement, that continues with your comparison.
Since you don't have title yet, may I suggest something having to do with deserts/sand/time? Because your poem has a lot of those imageries and recurring themes.
Generally, I loved it. It's a fantastic poem, that captures the essence of love realistically, and in some fashion, a depressing and pessimistic view.
(Jear-Bear)
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